Friday, May 18, 2012

I live in Seattle

Another poem by April Joy.  She was told to write a poem about where she lives.

I live in Seattle
For it is very hot now
Where the sun grows bigger
(And me)
If only you could live with me
For it is wonderful in Seattle.


Amazing, yes?  I added appropriate punctuation, but everything else she did on her own.  Here's what the original looked like:


1 comment:

  1. I like how she added an "e" on the end of "cood". She just new there was more too that word. :)

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